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Title: Searching for Shadows
Fandom: Harry Potter
Coupling: HarryxSnape
Rating: PG
Word Count: Exactly 100

Searching for Shadows
Following Embracing Shadows


We’re lost.

I survey the surroundings from the hilltop. It’s impossible to try and see beyond this thick mist and grey landscape. I can’t remember the last time I saw something this depressing. We’ve wandered too far from camp. I wonder how the rest of Hogwart’s population fares.

You appear at my side and offer me half an apple. “Our rations are running low.”

I feel your other hand linger over the back of my neck with your fingertips barely brushing my hair.

I turn and shiver as your fingers stroke across my throat. “We need to find the others.”

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Previous: Embracing Shadows

This didn't turn out quite as well as I hoped. I think it may be that these drabbles are slowly giving birth to a plot...

on 2004-08-21 08:48 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] xsectumsemprax.livejournal.com
Indeed.
It was well written, but just doesn't give the same effect as the others. It seems kind of incomplete to me...I know it's supposed to be short, but it's kind of awkward.
Just my opinion on the matter.

on 2004-08-22 02:52 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] stellahobbit.livejournal.com
I think it may be that these drabbles are slowly giving birth to a plot.

Yes. You must feed my wartime/Snarry obsession.

on 2004-08-22 08:35 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] bluerose16.livejournal.com
T___________T

You are so utterly, indescribably wonderful. I can't wait to see more of this!
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