The sun… So bright. Would it ever burn out?//It can, another voice whispered in his ears. It will.//Goku leaned forward is his seat until he was hovered just behind Sanzo. “Sanzo.”
*cringes* Maybe not the right thing to read at 5AM after no sleep. But I really like it. A lot. Although (or maybe because?) it pains me *gokuangst!*. I love that it's intense, and think you met Goku's introspection well. Love it.
Whatever it was that Goku really wanted to say crawled back down his throat and died. Instead he managed a weak whine, “I’m hungry, Sanzo. Are we there yet?” Just... aww ;_;
(But what is a gen-fic? I'm a bit dense when it comes to abbreviations o_o)
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on 2005-06-10 03:19 am (UTC)*cringes* Maybe not the right thing to read at 5AM after no sleep. But I really like it. A lot. Although (or maybe because?) it pains me *gokuangst!*. I love that it's intense, and think you met Goku's introspection well. Love it.
Whatever it was that Goku really wanted to say crawled back down his throat and died. Instead he managed a weak whine, “I’m hungry, Sanzo. Are we there yet?” Just... aww ;_;
(But what is a gen-fic? I'm a bit dense when it comes to abbreviations o_o)