"The light softens ever the harshest .. " it's not awkward so much as realizing what you mean by the word "lie". First read through I thought you meant to lie, as in lie down on the ground .. but second through I thought you meant lie as in, not telling the truth. I think that's where the awkwardness in that sentence comes from.
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ninetydegrees
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on 2004-07-26 08:42 pm (UTC)The last line makes me feel all swoony :)
"The light softens ever the harshest .. " it's not awkward so much as realizing what you mean by the word "lie". First read through I thought you meant to lie, as in lie down on the ground .. but second through I thought you meant lie as in, not telling the truth. I think that's where the awkwardness in that sentence comes from.
Thanks!