Very interesting, I like how you used light and dark, and how they were not as clear cut as they usually are in most stories. (IE: Light softens and glorifies, but lies.) The symbolism you used is perfect, it's not too strong, but it gets the point across. There are a few awkward sentences, but it's still a great drabble.
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ninetydegrees
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on 2004-07-26 08:21 pm (UTC)