I'm a fan of well-written fic, period, be it dark or light, though I do admit to being drawn very strongly to fiction that explores the less mainstream aspects of the human experience. As you can imagine it's not always easy to find, so I decided to compile an online list of really good darkfic for others who share my passion; hence my *cough* interesting lj.
From what I've read of your fic so far I'd say it's well-written :-) and if you hadn't said it wasn't beta’d I never would have guessed it. The only items I could find to take issue with are so tiny they're practically invisible. I had to re-read the prologue twice, at a slower pace, to find them, and I'm an annoyingly thorough proof-reader. ;-) The beta offer still stands if you're interested.
Re: Very good. :-)
From what I've read of your fic so far I'd say it's well-written :-) and if you hadn't said it wasn't beta’d I never would have guessed it. The only items I could find to take issue with are so tiny they're practically invisible. I had to re-read the prologue twice, at a slower pace, to find them, and I'm an annoyingly thorough proof-reader. ;-) The beta offer still stands if you're interested.
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